18 février 2022

My heart is not at all difficult to un
lock by certain
people
but
they don't seem
to want to.

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For comparison if I mess up the intuition and break on threes which I can, it loses rhythm and poise:

My heart is
not at all
difficult
to unlock
by certain
people but
they don't seem
to want to.

This puts the equilibrium into bubbles, I guess:

My heart is
not at all

difficult
to unlock

by certain
people, but

they don't seem
to want to...



My heart is
not at all

difficult
to unlock

by certain
people, but

they don't seem
to want to
...



My heart is
not at all

difficult
to unlock

by certain
people, but

they don't seem
to want to
...



My heart is

not at all


difficult
to unlock

by certain


people, but


they don't seem
to want to
.    .    .



My heart is

not at all


difficult
to unlock

by certain


people, but


they don't seem
to want to
.    .    .



Maybe that last beats the original... implied syllables could be "unlock it" or whatever you like.